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As a fashion photographer for more than thirty-five years, my work took me to many places and allowed me to see many things that I might not otherwise have had a chance to observe.
Obama's back-to-school speech inspires some kids - Yahoo! News
PHILADELPHIA – On the very first day of the school year, 12-year-old Mileena Rodriguez was reminded by President Barack Obama himself that hard work can take you places.
"my work took me to many places"
This is grammatically correct, isn't it? That clause is grammatically correct, but does not fit in that sentence.
"As a fashion photographer for more than thirty-five years" can not modify "my work".
Can you fix the sentence?
"... hard work can take you places."
Is this grammatically correct, too? It's correct.
Student or Learner