Student or Learner
1: "Ubqari is for your corporeal/body diseases, brain/mind tensions, and spiritual problems.All can read it even children.It's in Urdu." Rephrase it and correct it?Please
2: "The first magazine full of knowledge which is distributed for free.It's in Urdu." correct it please?
Thanks a million!
Ubqari wil help you understand and cope with ailments both physical and psychological. Anyone can read it--even children. It's printed in Urdu.Also:
It's full of knowledge and it's free. (It's printed in Urdu.)