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    #1

    proofreading

    If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

    1. I would like you to have a time to exchang your ideas on this argument/issues. Before you discuss this issue, I want you to list points to support your argument.

    2. Rich children have a better learning environment or have a higher chance of getting a higher eucation because their parents can afford the education cost.


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    Re: proofreading

    I am not teacher, and I can not see any errors except for the small spelling problems:

    exchang -> exchange
    eucation -> education

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    #3

    Re: proofreading

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

    1. I would like you to have a time to exchang your ideas on this argument/issues. Before you discuss this issue, I want you to list points to support your argument.

    2. Rich children have a better learning environment or have a higher chance of getting a higher eucation because their parents can afford the education cost.
    1. Could you please take some time to exchange ideas about this argument/issue? Before discussing the issue, I want you to list some points to support your argument.

    2. Since their parents can afford high educational costs, rich children may have a better learning environment and better chances to achieve higher educational leves.

    These are suggestions, I am not sure they are 100% correct.

    PS Not a native speaker

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    Re: proofreading

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can may I have your comments?

    1. I would like you to have a time to exchang your ideas on this argument/issues. Before you discuss this issue, I want you to list points to support your argument. I would like you to take the time to discuss your ideas on this matter/issues. Before discussing, I would like you to list points to your argument.

    2. Rich children have a better learning environment or have a higher chance of getting a higher eucation because their parents can afford the education cost. Children of well to do parents have a better environment and possibly a better chance of getting a higher education, because the family can afford the cost of the education.
    I am not a teacher.

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