Student or Learner
I tried alot to improve my writing ,, BUT I still can not write a good essay
may any one give me some advices to improve my writing
AND can I show my writing here to get some suggestions
R E A D ! !
Read, read and read. Read everything you see, magazines, newspapers, websites, posts at UsingEnglish. And mainly: books.
This is one of the major keys to mastering writing, read as many books as you can.
Then you can post some of your writings here, you will find many members to be glad to help you.
By the way this is the answer to your second question. YES, you can show your writing here to get some suggestions.
However, my advice now is that you post here only small paragraphs.
And regarding interesting ideas.
If you write long paragraphs (as this one I am writing), it will be more difficult to find some member willing to correct it.
Go for it !!