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    Smile Help me to rewrite ...

    would somebody help me to rewrite "my breath was as heavy as a ton of rocks"


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    Re: Help me to rewrite ...

    What is the context? Why was the breath heavy? If it were caused by running you could say:
    1. I was huffing and puffing. or 2. My breathing was labored. or 3. I had a hard time catching my breath.

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