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    • Join Date: Mar 2008
    • Posts: 18

    Post sir please check my STATEMENT OF PURPOSE


    I have always aspired to choose a career in a field that really stimulates me and holds a natural appeal to me. Today as I stand at the pathway of learning, I have with out hesitation chosen the field that excites me the most and draw the best of my abilities. The very quest to resolve the basic underlying principle of programming has been a source of tremendous inspiration and has promoted me to choose computers as my undergraduate and postgraduate.


    My inspiration to pursue a career in computer science was kindled by my high grades in Master of computer science and further due to my desire for challenging career. Computers was always been a compelling interest to me. Not only because of the depth of research that is possible in the fields, this being a developing field and I am aware that there is a large scope for improvement and vast exposure. I wish to pursue higher grades in my higher studies in this field.


    I was very fortunate to have my foundation of my education in MITROPOLITAN GOVERNMMENT BOYS SCHOOL (KARACHI) INDIA, where my aptitude for mathematics & science developed and was very keenly interested in these subjects. After completing my higher secondary school GOVERNMENT BOYS INTER COLLEGE (KARACHI) one of the leading colleges that produced excellent teaching staff & toppers. After completing my Intermediate educations I studied B.A from KARACHI UNIVERSITY (KARACHI). After B.A I completed MSC (database designing , software engineering and business process are my interesting subject ) from Preston university karachi. In 2006 I started my MS computer science (selected subjects data warehouse , database designing , software engineering and business process reengineering) from IQRA UNIVERSITY KARACHI my thesis on business intelligence in education sector.

    During the few years of my studies, I was exposed to fundamental aspects and potentials of my Software engineering. Which helped me gain a firm grasp of fundamentals as well as developed a special liking for the Computer basics and its applications?


    For the past five years I have been working as a system analysis cum computer programmer at the Iqra University. I am working on the design and development of a " university system". This long period has given me invaluable practical experience. It has given me the confidence to pursue a PhD degree and also kindled a desire to do research.


    I have learnt from your dept brochure and various other sources about the extensive research being under taken, especially in my areas of interest under the guidance of your eminent faculty and state of art at your esteemed university. Ten years from now I see myself leading an active research been engaged in works of advanced research.

    Given a chance to pursue RESEARCH study at your university. I am confident of my ability to measure up to your standards. I hope my application will be received forwardly and assure you that my interest and dedication will be reflected in my course work. An assistantship will certainly go a long way in motivating me further and strengthening my determination to realize my career objectives.

    My sole aim for coming to your country is to complete my PhD in COMPUTER science that will enhance my career opportunities when I return to Pakistan.

    (Muhammad Fahim Aamir)

    • Join Date: Aug 2009
    • Posts: 1,131

    Re: sir please check my STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

    This is highly out of the norm for an application to a university in the US.

    If you are applying to a school in the United States, then please post the "prompt," (the instructions regarding what to write) that you are responding to.

    If you are filling out a form, post as much of the instructions as you can.

    I will tell you that your work experience and your previous education (starting with your BA) should be bullet points listing "title" words and dates only.


    Karachi University (Karachi)
    BA Computer Science (2000)

    Preston University (Karachi)

    MSC Database Design (2003)

    Iqra University (Karachi)

    MS Computer Science (2006)


    Iqra University (Karachi) 2004 - 2009
    Systems Analysis

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