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    ... an atavistic urge to move to Italy where my grandparents were born.

    Hello.

    Though I was born and raised in Manhattan, I've always felt an atavistic urge to move to Italy where my grandparents were born.

    How does this sentence sound to you? Would it be better to put a comma right behind "Italy"?

    Thank you.


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    #2

    Re: ... an atavistic urge to move to Italy where my grandparents were born.

    I agree the comma would improve it.

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