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    #1

    are these sentences correct?

    The short shipped quantity should be 153 pcs instead of 126 pcs.

    Is there any people can take care your work when you are not in the office?

    After checked with our bank, both LC had cancelled since last Friday. Please find attached the copy of telex message for your reference. Please advise in case there is further problem.


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    Re: are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    The short shipped quantity should be 153 pcs instead of 126 pcs.

    Is there any people can take care your work when you are not in the office?

    After checked with our bank, both LC had cancelled since last Friday. Please find attached the copy of telex message for your reference. Please advise in case there is further problem.
    Here are my corrections and revisions. Let me know if you have any questions about what I've corrected or revised.

    The short-shipped quantity should be 153 pcs instead of 126 pcs.

    Is there anybody who can take care of your work when you are not in the office?

    After checking with our bank, I found out that both LCs were cancelled last Friday. I have attached a copy of the telex message for your reference. Please, inform us of any further problems.
    Last edited by PROESL; 23-Sep-2009 at 16:53.

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