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    #1

    are these sentence correct

    1) Please let me know when you are available so we can make arrangement.
    2) Please let me know your availability for next week.
    3) I am not sure if you will get to read the mail by then.If you don't get to read it by then, then i will see not wait for you.


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    Re: are these sentence correct

    Please let me know when you are available so we can make arrangement.
    > "arrangementS" in the plural.

    2) Please let me know your availability for next week.
    (this is fine.)

    3) I am not sure if you will get to read the mail by then.If you don't get to read it by then, then i will see not wait for you.
    > Double space after the period
    > the word "see" does not belong
    > It's too wordy and repetitive
    I'm not sure if you'll get to read the mail by then. If not, I won't wait for you.

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