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    Is my Email right?

    Hi..
    please fix grammer and punctuation marks in this email:

    that means you change your mind very quickly and you are always bored.. Is it right?..
    If right we will try to fix it..
    Note that boredom may make a person lazy somewhat.. so boredom is dangerous..
    you know that I offered a solution for this when I had said:

    (Boredom : is just you are wanting what you currently don't have, the trick is to want what you have.)
    so when you find yourself bored, immediately try to do something you have, or you can at least..
    When you are bored don't just pass time like using internet for example.. no .. try to do something will make you happy..
    I don't mean you of course.. I am talking in general..


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    Re: Is my Email right?

    that means you change your mind very quickly and you are always bored.. Is it right?..
    That means that you change your mind quickly and that you're always bored. Is that right?

    If right we will try to fix it..
    If that's true, we can try to fix it.

    Note that boredom may make a person lazy somewhat.. so boredom is dangerous..
    Boredom can make a person lazy, so boredom is dangerous.

    you know that I offered a solution for this when I had said:

    (Boredom : is just you are wanting what you currently don't have, the trick is to want what you have.)
    I offered a solution for this when I said that "Boredom is wanting what you don't currently have." The trick is to want what you do have.

    so when you find yourself bored, immediately try to do something you have, or you can at least..
    So when you find yourself feeling bored, immediately do something (?)

    When you are bored don't just pass time like using internet for example.. no .. try to do something will make you happy..
    When you're bored, don't just kill time -- by surfing the net, for example. No. Instead of that, do something that will make you happy.


    I don't mean you of course.. I am talking in general..
    I don't mean "you personally," of course. I'm speaking in general.

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    Re: Is my Email right?

    Thank you..

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