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    are these sentence correct

    1) Use barricade to form the area that the customer will line up.
    2) By doing that, it will disrupt the flow of the line/queue.
    3) They don't line up.
    4) Is their culture not to line.

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    Re: are these sentence correct

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) Use barricade to form the area that the customer will line up.
    2) By doing that, it will disrupt the flow of the line/queue.
    3) They don't line up.
    4) Is their culture not to line.
    I'd use something like:

    1 Use barriers to set out the area the customers will queue in.
    2 Doing that [I'd use 'this' if you're referring to sentence 1] will break up the flow of the queue [If you mean those channels they have to force people to go through a series of turnings to stop pushing, then this sounds negative- how about 'reduce the pressure' or 'prevent pushing' etc]
    4 In their culture they don't queue/form queues.

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