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    #1

    can you please correct this?

    With reference to your below mail, I assume that it refer to my visit to the head office today morning. When I came to our office today at 8.00am there was nobody in the office including you! Unfortunately this morning when I came out from my room, I found my vehicle’s two tyre were puncher and I managed to come to the office with one of my friends. I requested my fried to wait outside till I get permission to go to head office. But when I entered to the office nobody was in the office, but I waited few minitus and found one of our colleagues came to the office – I informed him that I am going to the head office.

    I was not able to wait for long time because my friend was waiting outside without proper parking.


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    Re: can you please correct this?

    With reference to your below mail, I assume that it refer to my visit to the head office today morning.
    I assume that your letter (below) refers to my visit to the Head Office this morning.

    Unfortunately this morning when I came out from my room, I found my vehicle’s two tyre were puncher
    When I left for work this morning, I found that two of my tyres were punctured.

    and I managed to come to the office with one of my friends.
    I managed to get a ride with one of my friends.

    I requested my fried to wait outside till I get permission to go to head office.

    I asked him to wait while I got permission to go to the Head Office.

    When I came to our office today at 8.00am there was nobody in the office including you!
    But when I entered to the office nobody was in the office, but I waited few minitus
    No one was in the office, so I waited for a few minutes.

    I was not able to wait for long time because my friend was waiting outside without proper parking.
    I wasn't able to wait for long because my friend was waiting outside for me without proper parking.

    and found one of our colleagues came to the office – I informed him that I am going to the head office.
    When one of our colleagues came in, I informed him that I was going to the Head Office.

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