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  1. azulizy
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    Red face pls help me rephrase this sentence

    Sex is no longer viewed as a thing of beauty or closeness


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    Re: pls help me rephrase this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by azulizy View Post
    Sex is no longer viewed as a thing of beauty or closeness
    Maybe one of these:

    Sex is no longer viewed as something of beauty or closeness.

    Sex is no longer viewed as producing beauty or closeness.


    But really, I think the original is fine.

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