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    #1

    Cool Can you check these sentences for me?

    Hi,




    - It says this place is a Chinese restaurant on the black board with a dragon on it.
    - It says this place is a Chinese restaurant on the black board with a dragon.
    - It says this place is a Chinese restaurant on the black board on which is a dragon.


    Which sentence is better?


    Sincerely,

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    Re: Can you check these sentences for me?

    Quote Originally Posted by outofdejavu View Post
    Hi,




    - It says this place is a Chinese restaurant on the black board with a dragon on it.
    - It says this place is a Chinese restaurant on the black board with a dragon.
    - It says this place is a Chinese restaurant on the black board on which is a dragon.


    Which sentence is better?


    Sincerely,
    What do you want to say?

    Do you expect us to comment or correct your sentences?
    I would say: The blackboard with a picture of a dragon drawn on it says it is a Chenese restaurant.

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