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I am trying to write a covering letter ; in addition, to my cv.
below is an example of a sentence and iam unsure the english grammar is correct.
I think i have used a conjuctive adverb to join the independent clause to a dependant clause.
I have previosly submitted a design to be printed at a local tshirt
company; subsequently ,there were keen interest from the general public and manager.
sorry i posted earlier that a conjunctive adverb joins independant clause and dependant clause. I now know thats incorrect. A conjunctive adverb joins two independant clauses.
so hopefully the sentence below is closer to being correct.
hopefully two independant clauses joined by a conjuctive adverb.
I had previosly submitted a design to be printed at a local tshirt
company; subsequently ,the manager and general public showed a keen interest.
thank you please hope somecan help.