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    Post What makes me laugh?

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    What makes me laugh?
    There are few things that make me laugh occasionally.
    Funny jokes that come in my everyday life make me laugh more than anything else. Here I am talking about funny jokes that I come across in my daily life at work, at a shopping mall and other places.
    Little kids make me laugh and I love making them laugh too. Kids are always fun to me. Children make me laugh and happy easily when I play with them.
    Sometimes I laugh out when I remember funny things that happened a long time ago.
    If I happen to read any jokes and any funny books or watch funny movies then they will make me laugh too.
    Actually I don’t have any specific or special thing that I would do on purpose or in a regular basis to make my shelf laugh.
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    Re: What makes me laugh?

    Quote Originally Posted by jkl View Post
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    What makes me laugh?

    There are few things that make me laugh occasionally.
    Funny jokes that come in my everyday life make me laugh more than anything else. Here I am talking about funny jokes that I come across in my daily life at work, at a shopping mall and other places.
    Little kids make me laugh and I love making them laugh too. Kids are always fun to me. Children make me laugh and happy easily when I play with them.
    Sometimes I laugh out when I remember funny things that happened a long time ago.
    If I happen to read any jokes and any funny books or watch funny movies then they will make me laugh too.
    Actually I donít have any specific or special thing that I would do on purpose or in a regular basis to make myself laugh.
    The text is fine. It needs no correction. Of course, you can do without the italicized 'will'.

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    Re: What makes me laugh?

    Quote Originally Posted by jkl View Post
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    What makes me laugh?
    There are a few things that make me laugh occasionally.
    [I think you mean "a few", not "few". In any case, it seems like a lot of things make you laugh.]
    Funny jokes that come in my everyday life make me laugh more than anything else. Here I am talking about funny jokes that I come across in my daily life at work, at a shopping mall and other places.
    Little kids make me laugh and I love making them laugh too. Kids are always fun to me. Children make me laugh and happy easily when I play with them.
    Sometimes I laugh out loud when I remember funny things that happened a long time ago. ["Laugh out" isn't a phrasal verb. Either "laugh" or "laugh out loud"]
    If I happen to read any jokes and any funny books or watch funny movies then they will make me laugh too. ['any' not really needed]
    Actually I donít have any specific or special thing that I would do on purpose or in a regular basis to make my shelf self laugh.
    R.

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