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    Please correct my text, thanks

    I am not the right to confirm your solution. You shall confirm it to our project manager or maketing manager before processing. We accepted 123 shipment to add an extra carton but not means this shipment can make the same action. You shall aware the drop test failed after our pre-inspection on 05 Oct and shall follow immediately rather than advised us the delivery date for your carton supplier needs 5working days. Please understand customer will not accept any reason as this shipment is delay almost one month. We can request our QC to perform pre-inspection for non 100% finished packing on 15 Oct but customer inspection must 100% goods on 16 Oct. Please confirm.

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    Re: Please correct my text, thanks

    Hi Zoe

    I'm not sure of your real intent in some sentences, but here goes:

    I am not the right person to accept your proposal.

    You should address it to our project manager or maketing manager before processing.
    We accepted your adding an extra carton to Shipment No 123 but this does not mean that we can agree to do the same on this shipment.

    You should be aware that the drop test failed after our pre-inspection on 5th Oct and needs to be rectified immediately rather than advising us that your carton supplier needs a further 5 working days for delivery. Please understand customer will not accept any excuses as this shipment has already been delayed by almost one month. We can request our QC to perform pre-inspection for non 100% finished packing on 15 Oct but customer inspection must be on 100% goods on 16 Oct. Please confirm.

    Hope this reflects what you intended

    Best regards
    NT

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