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    Question pls check my sentences

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    im currently doing an assignment.would u be kind enough to look at these sentences;
    The second is perseverance. As Malaysia gradually transforming, so will the forth coming challenges. We should expect these challenges coming in any form and should be well prepare in order to overcome the side effects. The people should be able to endure all kind of possibilities. Resilient and strong endurance are some factors that should be able to carry us through the upcoming undesirable events.
    any grammatical corrections?sentence structure?

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    Post Re: pls check my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by naza1406 View Post
    hi,
    im currently doing an assignment.would u be kind enough to look at these sentences;
    The second is perseverance. As Malaysia gradually transforming (transforms), so will the forth coming challenges. We should expect these challenges coming ( to come) in any form and should be well prepared in order to overcome the side effects. The people should be able to endure all kinds of possibilities. Resilient and strong endurance are some factors that should be able to carry us through the upcoming undesirable events.
    any grammatical corrections?sentence structure?
    (not a teacher)


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    Re: pls check my sentences

    thanks!..

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    Exclamation Re: pls check my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by naza1406 View Post
    hi,
    im currently doing an assignment.would u be kind enough to look at these sentences;
    The second challenge is perseverance. As Malaysia is gradually transforming, the forth/next challenge (s) will come (ing). We should expect these challenges coming in any form and should be well prepared (in order) to overcome the side effects. The people should be able to endure all kind of eventualities/possibilities. Resilient spirits and strong endurance are some of the basic qualities (factors) that should be able to carry us forward through the upcoming/looming undesirable events.
    any grammatical corrections?sentence structure?
    You can try this one. Delete words in brackets. It is your choice to use the alternative words suggested in red if sound good to you.

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