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    #1

    Are these sentences correct?

    How is the status for the defective goods? Please be remind that it is request return to customer by end of Oct. Please advise us the status.

    How is the status for the defective goods? Is still Storage in HK? Please keep us update for the return date and rework schedule ASAP.

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    #2

    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    How is the status for the defective goods? Please be remind that it is request return to customer by end of Oct. Please advise us the status.

    What is the status of the defective goods? Please be reminded that the customer is expecting their return by the end of October.

    The second Please advise us the status is both redundant and incorrect: you already asked for that and if used it should be Please inform us of the status [you don't need advice; you need information - so ask to be informed, not advised]


    How is the status for the defective goods? Is still Storage in HK? Please keep us update for the return date and rework schedule ASAP.

    What is the status of the defective goods. Are they still in storage in Hong Kong? Please update us on the anticipated return date and rework schedule as soon as possible.

    I try to avoid initialisms and abbreviations. I suggest you do the same to enhance clarity. "Oct" may not be as clear as "October" and ASAP is almost rude, it is so short.

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