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    #1

    Please modify my text

    There is no meaning / useful if we perform the online inspection on 24 Oct, as it / the goods will be finished at the same day. Actually, we shall not arrange an online inspection for the running model. But we would secure the shipment to reduce / avoid any problem before you start the production. Therefore, we will perform it tomorrow. Please note.


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    #2

    Re: Please modify my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    There is no meaning / useful point if we perform the online inspection on 24 Oct, as it / the goods will be finished on the same day. Actually, we shall not arrange an online inspection for the running model. But we would like to secure the shipment booking to reduce / avoid any problem before you start the production. Therefore, we will perform it tomorrow. Please note.

    Zoe, I presume you will perform the inspection "tomorrow"?

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