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    Wink people, I would appreciate your help, thks

    Hi is this paragraph understandable?
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    The commission and inclusion of Dr John Yu’s portrait by the National Portrait Gallery reflects the acceptance of Non-Western “émigré” art (Butler, 1997) in the official stream of contemporary Australian art. This acceptance is due to the multicultural experience that it’s occurring in the country. Artistically, Dr Yu’s portrait reflects a combination of international craft techniques with a Contemporary way of thinking"

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    Re: people, I would appreciate your help, thks

    Hi Saeta

    Understandable? Yes, but I agree it is somewhat difficult to read, due to the level of detail/complexity in the sentences used.

    Regards
    NT

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