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    A small para on marraige kindly check..

    Marriage is divine in its institution, sacred in its union, holy in its signification. A bond that brings pure joy and happiness into your life. Marriage gives one the deepest, happiest moments of life. And that's one of the reasons God created it.

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    Re: A small para on marraige kindly check..

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Marriage is divine in its institution, sacred in its union, holy in its signification. A bond that brings pure joy and happiness into your life. Marriage gives one the deepest, happiest moments of life. And that's one of the reasons God created it.
    It's fine.

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    Re: A small para on marraige kindly check..

    Marriage gives one the deepest, happiest moments of life.
    I think that we should put and
    Marriage gives one the deepest and happiest moments of life.

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    Re: A small para on marraige kindly check..

    Quote Originally Posted by sash2008 View Post
    Marriage gives one the deepest, happiest moments of life.
    I think that we should put and
    Marriage gives one the deepest and happiest moments of life.
    "And" is not necessary.

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    Re: A small para on marraige kindly check..

    Quote Originally Posted by sash2008 View Post
    Marriage gives one the deepest, happiest moments of life.
    I think that we should put and
    Marriage gives one the deepest and happiest moments of life.
    If you are making the point that the deepest moments are not necessarily the happiest moments - which is a good point - it should read: "... the deepest and the happiest moments".
    For balance, one could add that marriage also gives one the shallowest and the most miserable moments of life too.

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