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    Question is o.k?

    "By 1776, The Little Hermitage was not big enough for the Empressí increasing art piece collection; so, she commissioned Velten and other architects to design a larger repository, later called The Large Hermitage."

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    Re: is o.k?

    Quote Originally Posted by saeta View Post
    "By 1776, The Little Hermitage was not big enough for the Empressí increasing art piece collection; so, she commissioned Velten and other architects to design a larger repository, later called The Large Hermitage."
    I would suggest the small change below:
    By 1776, The Little Hermitage was not big enough for the Empressí ever increasing collection of works of art; so, she commissioned Velten and other architects to design a larger repository, later called The Large Hermitage."

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