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    Am i using advertisement correctly.Please help.

    1) The room rental available advertisement/ job opening advertisement/ job vacancy available posted on the frontdoor.
    2) The company provide free advertising space for people to advertise.

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    Re: Am i using advertisement correctly.Please help.

    1) The room rental available advertisement/ job opening advertisement/ job vacancy available posted on the frontdoor.

    The first I would rephrase as "Room for rent advertisement"
    The second is fine.
    The third is redundant (vacancy available): try Job vacancy posted on the front door.

    2) The company provide free advertising space for people to advertise.

    The last part is redundant and obvious. Only people advertise (animals and furniture do not). And you've already said it's advertising space - so what else is it for? Rewrite as
    The company provides free advertising space.

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