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    Red face please correct me...tq..

    hi,,i'm just a new learner ...actually i want to write long setence,,but just this sentence i can make for this time..hopefully anyone here can correct my language & grammar..i hope it can give me more motivation to improve my english..

    "i believe what i have believe before,,whatever happen in life is created perfectly by God..no need to be regret ..God will give when it is the time.."

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    Re: please correct me...tq..

    Quote Originally Posted by istana View Post
    hi,,i'm just a new learner ...actually i want to write long setence,,but just this sentence i can make for this time..hopefully anyone here can correct my language & grammar..i hope it can give me more motivation to improve my english..

    "i believe what i have believe before,,whatever happen in life is created perfectly by God..no need to be regret ..God will give when it is the time.."
    "I believe what I have always believed, whatever happens in life is created perfectly by God. There is no need to be regretful. God will give when it is the right time.."


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    Re: please correct me...tq..

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    "I believe what I have always believed, whatever happens in life is created perfectly by God. There is no need to be regretful. God will give when it is the right time.."
    ok..tq bhaisahab

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