i can't pass samspons elementary school without remembering the day ,3 year ago when dps close it down. sometimes i wonder why did they have to do that.
Are you looking for corrections? I am sure you already know that 'I' is always capitalized and that sentences start with capital letters, as do abbreviations of businesses, agencies, etc.
When you are talking to yourself (in writing), the exact words you speak are punctuated in the same way as ordinary direct quotations.
Perhaps you could start with these suggestions, and resubmit your post if you have other questions.