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I need your help please: Can you tell me if the following makes sense?
"The establishment of transport and logistics companies feeds the economic activity. Especially because, intrinsically, the success of the territory has been built thanks to human inputs.
The quality and the creativity of the company managers and employees of our territory have managed to revive at best out of all historical and industrial revolutions."
-Feeds the economic activity
-the success was built (is the past simple better in this case?)
-human inputs, could we also say human resources in this case?
Last edited by sarat_106; 23-Nov-2009 at 14:12.