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    Cool Help please!

    Hi there,

    I need your help please: Can you tell me if the following makes sense?


    "The establishment of transport and logistics companies feeds the economic activity. Especially because, intrinsically, the success of the territory has been built thanks to human inputs.

    The quality and the creativity of the company managers and employees of our territory have managed to revive at best out of all historical and industrial revolutions."

    My doubts:
    -Feeds the economic activity
    -the success was built (is the past simple better in this case?)
    -human inputs, could we also say human resources in this case?


    Cheers
    W

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    Re: Help please!

    Not a teacher.
    Quote Originally Posted by Will17 View Post
    Hi there,

    I need your help please: Can you tell me if the following makes sense?


    "The establishment of transport and logistics companies feeds the economic activity. Especially because, intrinsically, the success of the territory has been built thanks to human inputs.

    The quality and the creativity of the company managers and employees of our territory have managed to revive at best out of all historical and industrial revolutions."

    My doubts:
    -Feeds the economic activity
    -the success was built (is the past simple better in this case?)
    -human inputs, could we also say human resources in this case?


    Cheers
    W
    About your doubts, I would write:
    -contributes the economic growth
    -you don't mention a particular time, so it is correct to use present perfect tense.
    -human resources is better than human inputs

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    Exclamation Re: Help please!

    Quote Originally Posted by Will17 View Post
    Hi there,

    I need your help please: Can you tell me if the following makes sense?

    "The establishment of transport and logistics companies helps to feed (s)the economic activity. Especially because, intrinsically, the success of the territory has been built on these factors, thanks to human inputs.

    The quality and the creativity of the company managers and employees of our territory have been (managed to) revived in the (at) best interest (out) of all historical and industrial revolutions."


    My doubts:
    -Feeds the economic activity
    -the success was built (is the past simple better in this case?)
    -human inputs, could we also say human resources in this case?


    Cheers
    W
    The sentences need rewriting to make them sensible and meaningful.
    Last edited by sarat_106; 23-Nov-2009 at 15:12.

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