There are quite a few faults, do you want it corrected? I don't want to get involved in a "marking contest" with your teacher.Hello
I have just received my writing exam and I'm so not satisfied with the mark
And I'm not convinced with the mistakes that my teacher considered
Please read it and grade it out of 20 and then I will tell you what is the grade that she gave to me
My friend Samar is a a very generous person, and she proves several points about generousity. For example, she proves that being generous does not mean that the person should be very rich, I know that she passed through hard times finintialy, but never stopped giving. Generousity not depending on the growing up environment is another example, Samar's father is kind of stingy, but that did not make her like him. She also proves that sometimes generous people give what they might be in need for, to exemplifie that that I remember once she gave some money to a poor lady and later I knew that it was all she had. Generousity is a great quality that everybody should have.
Note: I wrote it exactly the way I did in the exam even with the spelling mistakes.
There is no problem with the lenght of the paragraph.
Student or Learner