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  1. christopher
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    Smile punctuation and wording

    Of the two daily use dental toothpastes, Colgate brand is a better consumer value.

    my concern is punct. and wording? This is my conclusion of a comparison contrast paragraph. Punctuation... Wording..... I am soo frustrated now!

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    Re: punctuation and wording

    Quote Originally Posted by christopher View Post
    Of the two daily use dental toothpastes, Colgate brand is a better consumer value.

    my concern is punct. and wording? This is my conclusion of a comparison contrast paragraph. Punctuation... Wording..... I am soo frustrated now!
    Here's an alternative:
    Of the two daily-use toothpastes, Colgate brand is better value for the consumer.
    (Are there any non-dental toothpastes?)

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