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    #1

    proofread

    Hi there,
    Can you proofread this?

    Most parents are worried that their children start dating while they are still students because this would easily affect their studies when their relationships go wrong.

    tks
    pete

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    #2

    Re: proofread

    Perhaps:
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    Most parents are concerned about their children dating while they are still in school because the distraction of dating could affect their studies.
    What do you think?



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