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I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below. Thanks
1) Don't reply on technical energy saving techniques
Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects.
2) Don't just busily practising energy conservation without going on to training
Rewrite:Training need to be concentrated and provided with carrying energy saving plan
3) Don't give up easily even under adverse conditions
Rewrite:Problems to be solved rather than dismissed
4) Don't think the energy conservation job is easy
Rewrite:Difficult work of energy conservation to be bear in mind everytime
A: Don't rely only on technical energy saving techniques.
B: The focus should be on human behavior rather than technical energy saving techniques.
A: Don't give up easily even under adverse conditions.
B: If at first you don't succeed, try try again.