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    Does this sentence make sense?

    It is clear from my four strong points in my confirmation that the benefits of implementing public healthcare far outweigh its costs in America.

    Hi, I'm not sure about the grammar in the above sentence. Does it sound weird? I'm particularly concerned about the pronoun 'its' because I'm looking at my grammar book and it says to avoid using pronouns to refer to words other than nouns.

    If it's weird, please tell me why.

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    Re: Does this sentence make sense?

    You are using its to refer to a noun. The problem is, the noun you are referring to is plural and you are using a singular pronoun. Do you see the problem? Can you correct it now?

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