Write a descriptivie sentence about a newly planted apple tree for me. PLEASE!!!
Apparently you missed the part that says "Please don't ask us to do or correct your homework; this is a place to discuss language."
However, if you want to talk about a sentence you write yourself -- whether your use of descriptive language is appropriate, etc. -- then by all means, please write your sentence and we'll discuss.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.