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    Please tell me what is the correct structure.

    Let your heart with these astounding pieces of Gold jewellery overflow with joy

    or

    Let your heart overflow with joy with these astounding pieces of Gold jewellery.
    or
    No doubt! These astounding pieces of Gold jewellery will make your heart overflow with joy

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    #2

    Exclamation Re: Please tell me what is the correct structure.

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Let your heart with these astounding pieces of Gold jewellery overflow with joy

    or

    Let your heart overflow with joy with these astounding pieces of Gold jewellery.
    or
    No doubt! These astounding pieces of Gold jewellery will make your heart overflow with joy
    There is nothing wrong with the structure, but it is the way of expression which appeals most. In my openion it is the third which can be further modified. You can try the following.
    Let these astounding pieces of gold jewelry make your heart overflow/sing with joy.

    No doubt! as a proud possessor of these astounding pieces of gold jewelry, your heart will overflow/sing with joy.

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    Re: Please tell me what is the correct structure.

    Nothing wrong in structure of sentence..
    you can use any of them but last two sentences are used commonly..

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