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    revising of eight short sentences

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to tell me whether the following sentences sound acceptable for your refined hearing?

    1.I had got both legs through one leg of my shorts.
    2.I rolled my sleeves down.
    3.I loosed the color of my shirt.
    4.My collar cut into my neck and I opened it.
    5.My collars were always too thigh now.
    6.His gray shorts were slicking to him with sweat.
    7.To his blue shirt was pinned the insignia of a guide.
    8.Flapping his white coat doctor walked down the corridor

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V.

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    Exclamation Re: revising of eight short sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by vil View Post
    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to tell me whether the following sentences sound acceptable for your refined hearing?

    1.I had got both legs through into one leg of my shorts. (The leg of the short must be very wide)
    2.I rolled my sleeves down.Ok
    3.I lost/loosed the color of my shirt. The color was not fastened to the shirt.
    4.My collar cut into my neck and I opened it. Ok
    5.My collars were always too thigh now. It does not covey any meaning atleast to me.
    6.His gray shorts were slicking to him with sweat. Ok
    7.To his blue shirt was pinned the insignia of a guide. Ok
    8.Flapping his white coat the doctor walked down the corridor Ok

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V.
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