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    #1

    help me to correct my letter.?????

    help me to correct my letter.?????

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    Sub: Request for 12 days leave (with out pay)

    Dear Sir
    This is to request your kind approval for 12 days leave (with out pay) to stay with my family at my home town in the celebration of up coming Christmas Holidays from 19th to 30th December 2009.

    I hope will consider my request.

    Yours Sincerely
    excitekps


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    #2

    Re: help me to correct my letter.?????

    Quote Originally Posted by excitekps View Post
    help me to correct my letter.?????

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    The Admin.Manager

    Sub: Request for 12 days unpaid leave (with out pay)

    Dear Sir Mr XXXXX/Ms YYYYY
    This is to request your kind approval for 12 days leave (without pay) to stay with my family at my home town in the celebration of up coming over the forthcoming Christmas Holidays from 19th to 30th December 2009 inclusive.

    I hope you will favourably consider my request.

    Yours sincerely
    excitekps
    You should address the manager by name - presumably you know him/her.

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    #3

    Re: help me to correct my letter.?????

    Quote Originally Posted by excitekps View Post
    help me to correct my letter.?????


    To
    The Admin.Manager

    Sub: Request for 12 days leave (with out pay)

    Dear Sir
    This is to request your kind approval for 12 days leave (with out pay) to stay with my family at my home town in the celebration of up coming Christmas Holidays from 19th to 30th December 2009.

    I hope will consider my request.

    Yours Sincerely
    excitekps

    To
    The Admin. Manager

    Sub: Request for 12 days leave (without pay)

    Dear Sir,

    This is to I request your kind approval for 12 days of leave (without pay) to stay spend time with my family at in my hometown in for the celebration of upcoming Christmas Holidays celebrations from 19th to 30th December 2009.

    I hope you will consider and approve my request.

    Yours Sincerely
    excitekps

    Note other variations for letter subject line:
    Request for 12 days of leave without pay
    Request for 12 days of unpaid leave
    Request for 12 day unpaid leave

    Note other variation for letter body:
    I request your kind approval for a 12 day unpaid leave to celebrate the upcoming Christmas with my family in my hometown from 19th to 30th December 2009.

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    #4

    Re: help me to correct my letter.?????

    Dear Sir.
    thank you very much.

    Regards
    excitekps


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    Re: help me to correct my letter.?????

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    Sub: Request for 12 days leave (without pay)

    Dear Sir,
    I am kindly requesting of your approval for 12 days leave with no pay to stay with my family at my hometown to celebrate the coming of the Christmas holidays from December 19th to the 30th of 2009.

    I hope you will consider my request. Thank you!

    Yours Sincerely,
    excitekps

    Comments
    OK letter, I would make it longer if you want to actually persuade someone.

    Grade
    6/10

    ~Kevin Li

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    #6

    Re: help me to correct my letter.?????

    thank you verry much

    regards
    excitekps

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    Thumbs up Re: help me to correct my letter.?????

    Dear Mr.Kevin

    Thanks for your valued correction on my letter. Can you make it little bit longer, If you can.
    Thank you very much once again

    Regards

    excitekps

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