The red bits are where your sentences are wrongly joined (or not joined) in the original. If you're not sure about any of the corrections, ask (but think first).Could someone please check my essay, please.
HonestyCould (Can?) one be ever honest? This is a question that repeats itself again and again. If one is not honest to his friend about anything he/she says, what could (would?) happen to the world? I think that other kids will do the same. Lying
over and over(again and again) to everyone and that is the worst thing that could ever happen. That people around you are lying and there will be no honesty in the world.
You need to find out what a sentence is, and try to use them in essays like this.
I could tell that from
thean experience I had. The last time, I told my parents that there was no parents' meeting in the school this year. Therefore, my parents both believed me. So I thought that a little lie wouldn't affect anything. I lied about that because my marks were bad in some of the subjects and I hadn't showed them to my parents. After allthe days passed and my parents missed the parents meeting, I started lying in other things too, thinking that nothing would change. While it did, I was careless about my marks, and my attitude changed from respectful to disrespectful person. All of that happened because of dishonesty to people that surrounded me and that wanted my benefit.
A couple of weeks passed and my teacher called my mother and told her about me; that I had changed in my personality and my marks were awful. My teacher also asked my mother about the reason why she skipped the parents' meeting. Then my mother ended the call with an exclaimed face. She called me and told me about what
hadmy teacher had told her about me. I felt bad about it and I realized that lies always will be discovered no matter what happens.
hadlearned how to be honest from that situation. I also learned that lies are always limiting [?] and I shouldn't lie to my parents because they always want edwhat is good tofor me and the best thing one ever learn is from one experience and from his own past.
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