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    Red face my teacher plz cheack my letter.

    we are a typicla nuclear family we are 4 sisters and my parents.my father is retired and my mom is home worker.i have two older sisters shiva and mina they are married and each one have a child.my younger sister is parisa she is 23 years old .she is student and she studies accounting.but our salary is not enough and me and parisa want to get a part-job and help our parents.it was about my family.


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    Re: my teacher plz cheack my letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    We are a typical nuclear family. We are four sisters and my parents. My father is retired and my mom is a home worker. I have two older sisters, Shiva and Mina. They are married and both have a child. My younger sister is Parisa and she is 23 years old. She is student and she studies accounting. However, our salary is not enough and Parisa and I want to get a part-time job to help our parents. It was about my family.
    (Not a teacher)

    I changed, 'me and Parisa' to Parisa and I, although I'm not 100% sure this is correct.

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