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    Can someone help me to correct this sentence. thanks

    1) Did you work at other houses before you coming to my place to move the furniture into my new home?
    2) Did you came from another job before coming to my place to move the thing into my new home?
    3) I don't do removal job, because is tiring.

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    Re: Can someone help me to correct this sentence. thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) Did you work at other houses before you coming to my place to move the furniture into my new home?
    2) Did you came from another job before coming to my place to move the thing into my new home?
    3) I don't do removal job, because is tiring.
    1. Did you work at other houses before you came to my place...
    2. Did you come ...
    3. I don't do removal jobs because they are tiring.
    (I am not sure what you mean by a removal job. Do you mean a moving job?)


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    Re: Can someone help me to correct this sentence. thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) Did you work at other houses before you coming to my place to move the furniture into my new home?
    2) Did you came from another job before coming to my place to move the thing into my new home?
    3) I don't do removal job, because is tiring.
    1) Did you work at other houses before coming/you came to my place to move the furniture into my new home?
    2) Did you come from another job before coming to my place to move the thing into my new home?
    3) I don't do removal jobs because they are tiring.


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    Re: Can someone help me to correct this sentence. thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) Did you work at any other houses before you came to my place to move the furniture into my new home?
    2) Did you come from another job before coming to my place to move the furniture into my new home?
    3) I don't do removal jobs, because they are tiring.
    (Not a teacher)

    I changed 'thing' to 'furniture' but if 'thing' is more appropriate then so be it.

    Also, you could say 'I dont do removals' instead of 'removal jobs'.

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