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    Need a Review on this Followup letter

    Hi I wrote this letter as a second followup letter.I would appreciate if someone could review my post and check grammar and sentence formation.
    __________________________________________________ ______________

    Hello firstname,

    I hope you are doing well. I wanted to follow up on the interview I had with (interviewer 1)and (interviewer 2) last week on day mm/dd.

    Discussing about the position with (interviewer 1)and (interviewer 2) reinforced my interest in this position. I am confident that I fit perfectly for this job with my exposure to both skill 1 and skill 2 along with the keen interest to learn. I am also certain that working directly with the clients at (previous company) would enable me to work closely with the customers in an event of any issues.

    I am interested in this opportunity and I look forward to hearing from you.

    Regards
    My Name
    __________________________________________________ _____________

    I would appreciate a quick response as I need to send it out today. I appreciate your help.
    Last edited by raven_ep83; 22-Dec-2009 at 18:50. Reason: Post was missing the intention.

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    Re: Need a Review on this Followup letter

    Quote Originally Posted by raven_ep83 View Post
    Hi I wrote this letter as a second followup letter.I would appreciate if someone could review my post and check grammar and sentence formation.
    __________________________________________________ ______________

    Hello firstname,

    I hope you are doing well. I wanted to follow up on the interview I had with (interviewer 1)and (interviewer 2) last week on day mm/dd.

    Discussing about the position with (interviewer 1)and (interviewer 2) reinforced my interest in this position. I am confident that I fit perfectly for this job with my exposure to both skill 1 and skill 2 along with the keen interest to learn. I am also certain that working directly with the clients at (previous company) would enable me to work closely with the customers in an event of any issues.

    I am interested in this opportunity and I look forward to hearing from you.

    Regards
    My Name
    __________________________________________________ _____________

    I would appreciate a quick response as I need to send it out today. I appreciate your help.
    (NOT a teacher) Hopefully, a writing teacher will soon answer you. In the meantime, may I suggest that you work on the second paragraph. Maybe something like: The discussion I had with Ms. X and Mr. Y only reinforced my eagerness to seek this position. I am confident that I am fully qualified because of my skills and interest. My past professional experiences will ensure that I am able to handle any kind of customer-related issue.

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