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    Kindly chcek my sentences

    It's for home interiors ad content:
    Blame us…if your guests do not wish to leave your sweet home turned paradise with our interiors
    Every nook and corner of your home emanates lavishness beyond luxury

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    Re: Kindly chcek my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    It's for home interiors ad content:
    Blame us…if your guests do not wish to leave your sweet home turned paradise with our interiors
    Every nook and corner of your home emanates lavishness beyond luxury
    (NOT a teacher) Your ad looks great. Here in the States, the expression is "every nook and cranny." Good luck with your business.

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    Re: Kindly chcek my sentences

    How about this kindly check the following

    Blame us…if your guests do not wish to leave your sweet home turned paradise with Granduer Interiors

    Sometimes you might release that there is only entrance, but no exit because all your guests would keep staring at the captivating interiors of your home, impeccably designed by Grandeur. We are proud to bring you elegance and design marked by the "Made in Italy" signature, from “Pianca”. It offers a range from custom-made furniture solutions to furnish the entire home.

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    Re: Kindly chcek my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    How about this kindly check the following

    Blame us…if your guests do not wish to leave your sweet home turned paradise with Granduer Interiors

    Sometimes you might release that there is only entrance, but no exit because all your guests would keep staring at the captivating interiors of your home, impeccably designed by Grandeur. We are proud to bring you elegance and design marked by the "Made in Italy" signature, from “Pianca”. It offers a range from custom-made furniture solutions to furnish the entire home.
    (NOT a teacher) Until a better writer than I answers you, may I humbly offer a few ideas? Maybe something like: Your guests may be so captivated by the elegantly designed Grandeur interiors that they may never wish to leave. We are proud to bring you the elegance and design marked by the "Made in Italy" signature of Pianca, which offers a wide-range of custom-made furniture for the entire home.

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    Re: Kindly chcek my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by TheParser View Post
    (NOT a teacher) Until a better writer than I answers you, may I humbly offer a few ideas? Maybe something like: Your guests may be so captivated by the elegantly designed Grandeur interiors that they may never wish to leave. We are proud to bring you the elegance and design marked by the "Made in Italy" signature of Pianca, which offers a wide-range of custom-made furniture for the entire home.
    I really liked your sytle of writing, thanks a lot for your kind time..would really appreciate your inputs in future also. never point what I am good at, only put what I am not gud at and also with a solution/suggestion so I caq improve on it. Thanks a lot again wish you a merry christmas

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