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    Hi, please proofread one sentnece.

    Hi, teachers!
    Can you proofread the sentence below ?
    If possible can you make the sentence a little longer by adding some phrases? Thank you in advnace.

    PNC Bank Loan staff member is currently processing your request that you made last week.

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    Re: Hi, please proofread one sentnece.

    Quote Originally Posted by juliana0403 View Post
    Hi, teachers!
    Can you proofread the sentence below ?
    If possible can you make the sentence a little longer by adding some phrases? Thank you in advnace.

    PNC Bank Loan staff member is currently processing your request that you made last week.
    I can't make it any longer, it is not necessary, but I would suggest his: " A PNC Bank Loan staff member is currently processing the request that you made last week.

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