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    Is is sentence right?

    1) The little girl has received her most desirabel christmas gift which is to be able to go to Disneyland.

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    Re: Is is sentence right?

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) The little girl has received her most desirabel christmas gift which is to be able to go to Disneyland.
    1) The little girl has received her most desirable Christmas gift which is to be able would enable her to go to Disneyland.


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    Re: Is is sentence right?

    Quote Originally Posted by xpert View Post
    1) The little girl has received her most desirable Christmas gift which is to be able would enable her to go to Disneyland.

    This is certainly a better constructed sentence but it seems to me that it slightly changes the meaning of the sentence.

    An alternative:
    The little girl has received her most desirable gift, that is, to be able to go to Disneyland.

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    Re: Is is sentence right?

    Thanks for helping me, I really appreciate it. Merry christmas.

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