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    plesase proofread

    I partly agree with the teenagers start dating while they are still in secondary school. If they make good use of the time being together to help each other with their studies, dating is good for them; otherwise dating at an too early age will disrupt their studies.

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    Re: teenage

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there
    plesase proofread

    I partly agree with the teenagers start dating while they are still in secondary school. If they make good use of the time being together to help each other with their studies, dating is good for them; otherwise dating at an too early age will disrupt their studies.

    tks
    pete
    I would drop the words in blue. Also, it would be simpler to say "If they make good use of their time together..."

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    Re: teenage

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there
    plesase proofread

    I partly agree with the teenagers start dating while they are still in secondary school. If they make good use of the time being together to help each other with their studies, dating is good for them; otherwise dating at an too early age will disrupt their studies.

    tks
    pete
    Also, say 'dating at too-early an age', not "dating at an too early age".

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