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    Kinldy check sentence and its puntuation

    The experience and expertise of more than a half century, has evolved DC Jewellers as one of the most loved jewelry brands in India, and abroad.

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    Re: Kinldy check sentence and its puntuation

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The experience and expertise of more than a half century, has evolved DC Jewellers as one of the most loved jewelry brands in India, and abroad.
    Things evolve "into" something.

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    Exclamation Re: Kinldy check sentence and its puntuation

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The experience and expertise of more than a half century, has evolved DC Jewellers as one of the most loved jewelry brands in India, and abroad.
    The word “trust” goes well with jewelry. You can say:
    The experience and expertise of more than a half century, has evolved DC Jewellers into one of the most trusted and loved jewelry brands in India, and abroad.

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    Re: Kinldy check sentence and its puntuation

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The experience and expertise of more than a half century has made DC Jewellers one of the most loved jewelry brands in India and abroad.
    But I would say 'More than half a century of expertise and experience has made DC Jewellers one of the.......'.


    I wouldn't use any commas.

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    #5

    Re: Kinldy check sentence and its puntuation

    I do agree with you 2006


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    Re: Kinldy check sentence and its puntuation

    (Not a teacher)

    As a side thing, I notice that the company is called DC Jewellers (the British spelling), but you type the word jewellery (British spelling) as 'jewelry' (American spelling). It's nit-picking really, but it seems inconsistent to me.

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