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    #1

    which / , which

    Hi,

    Question:
    1) Which sentence is more sensible?
    2) Do my opinions correct?

    Sentence1:

    I have good team working skills which make your company operative more smoothly.
    Sentence2:
    I have good team working skills, which make your company operative more smoothly.

    My opinion:
    For sentence1:
    "The skills that I have" are the skills that can make your company operate more smoothly.
    For sentence2:
    Since I have team working skills, I can make your company operate more smoothly.

    Both sensible but sentence 2 seem better.

    Thanks

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    #2

    Re: which / , which

    I guess, saying that you are a good/great team-player may sound more natural.

    By the way;,which

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    #3

    Re: which / , which

    What euncu said.

    Also, you could say: "I work well as part of a team."

    (Say: "Are my opinions correct?" or "Do you agree with my opinions?")



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    #4

    Re: which / , which

    I suspect you mean:

    I have good teamwork skills, which will make your company operate more smoothly.


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    #5

    Re: which / , which

    "I would be a good addition to the team" would be good.

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