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    sense the real English

    Dear teachers,
    Could you check whether I have written the sentence correctly? The sentence is:

    She remembered that in one of the side streets there once was a club she used to go to a few pop concerts in the 90s.

    The sentence seems strange to me. Do you think the same?
    I'll be really grateful for your kind help.

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    #2

    Re: sense the real English

    Quote Originally Posted by cat's_eyes View Post
    Dear teachers,
    Could you check whether I have written the sentence correctly? The sentence is:

    She remembered that in one of the side streets there once was a club she used to go to a few pop concerts in the 90s.

    The sentence seems strange to me. Do you think the same?
    I'll be really grateful for your kind help.
    Yes, it's strange, try this: She remembered that in one of the side streets there was once a club, where she went to a few pop concerts in the 90s.


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    Re: sense the real English

    Thank you very much:)

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