Do you find any mistakes in those sentences?:
1.My family, consisted of my mother, my father and 6 younger brothers and sisters, is quite large.
2.I have recently written a book , entitled a perfect nanny which sold in hundreds of copies.
Thanks in advance!
Yes, I can see mistakes. Can you? It seems to be your assignment.
I urge other posters to NOT simply provide corrections, but rather for the original poster to try to fix the mistakes him- or herself.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.