Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. new2grammar's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Punjabi
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India

    • Join Date: May 2008
    • Posts: 880
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #1

    Kinldy check the structure of the sentence

    With his son’s – Mark and John; the two stalwarts who have joined DC in 1985 and 1987 respectively, DC Jewellers has become a synonym for glamour.

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Oriya
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India

    • Join Date: Mar 2008
    • Posts: 2,121
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #2

    Exclamation Re: Kinldy check the structure of the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    With his sons,namely, Mark and John; the two stalwarts who have joined DC in 1985 and 1987 respectively, DC Jewellers has become a synonym for glamour.
    Son is plural here, so remove the apostrophe and replace (-) with a comma.


    • Join Date: Nov 2009
    • Posts: 966
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #3

    Re: Kinldy check the structure of the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    With his sons, Mark and John the two stalwarts who have joined DC in 1985 and 1987 respectively, DC Jewellers has become a synonym for glamour.


    Mark and John identifies 'his sons'. 'the stalwarts' with the relative clause further describes 'his sons'.

Similar Threads

  1. Please check my grammar in this sentence
    By bbmak in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 21-Oct-2009, 03:02
  2. Kindly check the structure of sentence
    By new2grammar in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 06-May-2008, 08:44
  3. Sentence Check: Adjective or Adverb and Modification
    By Unregistered in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 16-Mar-2008, 05:53
  4. question on strange structure of sentence
    By zhengrong in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 13-Mar-2008, 14:18
  5. Improving dense sentence structure
    By Mic062 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 06-Mar-2005, 04:36

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •