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    Post Are these sentences correct?

    As per Mr.X's instructions, M/S Company removed the following items which installed themselves in the above project and handed over to us.
    As per Mr. X's instructions, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed, and received at our stores.


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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    As per Mr.X's instructions, M/S Company removed the following items which installed themselves in the above project and handed over to us.
    As per Mr. X's instructions, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed, and received at our stores.


    both the sentnces are correct according to me

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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    As per Mr.X's instructions, M/S Company removed the following items which installed themselves [?] in the above project and handedover to us. [handed what over to us?]
    As per Mr. X's instructions, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed [fixed what?] , and received at our stores.
    Neither of them makes complete sense.
    1. Do you mean the items installed themselves after being removed and were then handed over to you? How can a removed item install itself?
    2. M/S Company who fixed what?
    What were received at your stores? Do you mean:
    As per Mr. X's instructions, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed the items, and then sent them to our stores ?

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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymott View Post
    1. Do you mean the items installed themselves after being removed and were then handed over to you? How can a removed item install itself?
    Maybe, it is like this;
    As per Mr.X's instructions, M/S Company removed the following items, which had been installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to us.

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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymott View Post
    Neither of them makes complete sense.
    1. Do you mean the items installed themselves after being removed and were then handed over to you? How can a removed item install itself?
    2. M/S Company who fixed what?
    What were received at your stores? Do you mean:
    As per Mr. X's instructions, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed the items, and then sent them to our stores ?
    As per our PM instructions, the subcontractor (the company) removed the following items (because of the items were not cope with our standard) which were installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to us

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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    As per our PM instructions, the subcontractor (the company) removed the following items (because of the items were not cope with our standard) which were installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to us
    As per our PM instructions, the subcontractor removed the following non-compliant items, which had been installed automatically prior to the project being handed to us.

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